A battle between giant men and the perfect robot. Though he was perfect nothing can achieve full perfection not even something that is perfect(unless you are a lion).
I sat in the dark blue ocean one day thinking over the possible outcomes of the battle. I reminisced from battle long ago a leprechaun spoke of. Then I knew it was destiny.
It was a stormy morning, I sprawled out of my bed to see the heavens celebrating gay and merrily with nature the previous night. A small layer of snow kissed the ground and I was their to witness its untouched beauty.
After that the boring stage of the adventure came around. I was heading to the quill vectronian centroid of the world which was all old woman and cheesy goods they were trying to push off on people. It was basically a white room with a bizarre inside, interesting for the first 5 seconds then terrible for the remaining time. This area i tried skipping through as fast as i could. After this I needed to take a train to the fox's den where i would here stories and learn the future that will lead up to the next few wars. The men in the fox's den were the elders or oracles with all the knowledge. They were geniuses and I needed to make it their to study.
I arrived to see the train leaving. It was gone and I had to wait for 8 more hours. It felt like forever but eventually the grueling wait ended. So i hopped on the train and headed to the Fox den.
"Hello?" I screamed through the door way, no one replied. But I still proceeded. Stunned I saw all of the Oracles and Elders dead lying in a pool of blood on the floor. After around 5 minutes I was used to the smell of death and I let my curiosity get the best of me. I decided to try on one of the Oracles head dresses mounted on a stand, that was left when someone sat it down before the massacre. As I set it on my head the bells chimed and I saw through the eyes of all the cameras throughout the land that were hidden. All of a sudden something caught my eye. A robot, but not only a robot. About 100 men followed chasing it with swords and daggers. I saw the robot quickly turn around and kill them all within the blink of an eye. I cryed in fear because I could tell this thing was coming to me and it wouldn't stop to have a play date. Quickly 12 Giants rushed out and tackled him on his way to me. This wrecked the robots body. He could not walk for 2 more years until eventually his owner fixed him. But he was never the same.
The symbolism i used ties into the day i watched the superbowl when the giants defeated the patriots.
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ReplyDeleteDan I honestly had no idea what you were talking about. But it did entertain me for about 3 minutes so ill give you that.
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ReplyDeleteYou have a great imagination Dan, it's a very creative story and kept me reading but it is a little wierd...
ReplyDeleteAmazing creative story. It kept me wanting to read more, and you have such a great imagination. You must write another creative story because you are spectacular writer, and I loved the beginning.
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ReplyDeleteDan...what can i say..what an imagination. Good job with the story was goof and fun to read at the same time.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Dan, you should develop this Idea to make a book out of it, I would defiantly buy one. :)
ReplyDeleteI really like how creative this is Dan. You are a good writer.
ReplyDeleteYou have a amazing imagination, you did a great job of exaggerating!
ReplyDeleteDaniel, you probably have the most amazing mind ever. It's crazy what you can think of...like in Bio 1 last semester! It was great and I miss you sooo much I hope we stay best friends all through our 4 years at Stevenson because they are flying by and I want people like you to spend this time with. I miss you and Love you-Kyla<33
ReplyDeleteI really like the imagination going into this, it's really funny, it made me laugh. (:
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